Reviews for You've Got Mail |
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![]() ![]() ![]() will this story actuall y have a story or will this story be based on emails..or w/e -.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahahaha...great chapter. i like how you capture all of high school relationships in a couple of emails. its really funny how true all of that is. alex sounds great...i really like the dialogue between konthaar and alex. and the "i heard through my girlfriend who heard through her older sister who heard from her best friend who heard through her MAID (LOL at that one!)" stuff is great. the sns are nice too...the only little thing that annoys me about them is how Eva's and Maggie's look the same to me at first glance...so many C's and K's \. its probably just me. anyway, UPDATE SOON! i cant wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it, but i think it may be easier to read/understand (and write) if u used real names instead of screen names... But i like the story! |
![]() ![]() i love how this story is in email... it's even more funny. :) UPDATE SOON, PLEASE! that-is-so-barbie |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! Hilarious. Likin' this already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahahaha! That's hilarious. I love your stories. You always make fun of dimwitted popular people. It's so awesome, lol. LOVE THIS! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! the last email was great. such untrustable friends...tsk tsk! anyway, update soon! update LIB too. FAST! you wouldn't want to keep your devoted readers waiting in suspense, now would you? *blinks innocently* |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Gah!...I'm dizzy from the email looking things!O.O...anyways...is is eva chatting with her friends right?well its pretty good so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. who cares about format when the writing is as good as yours? update soon; cant wait to see what happens when the cuz's meet! ~Sage |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha. reminds me of my life, the last message. great update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! i like it! thought u should know u changed "james" in the beginning to "jerod" in the end |
![]() ![]() That's kewl! I like the whole e-mail thingy, it is a really good story. Just don't forget about your other stories! Nicely Done.~aquarius piscies~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its starting off pretty good. The ending was funny. - Please hurry up with the updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting...hannas a blabble mouth isnt she... |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story so far. update soon |