| Reviews for You've Got Mail |
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   DragonFaeLynn chapter 4 . 9/8/2005 This is an interesting way to deal with a story. Will it be like this the whole entire thing? |
| DragonFaeLynn chapter 2 . 9/8/2005 Interesting way to start a story. I like it... OMG. I hate that four letter word so much now... (like) like oh my god! Erm... yeah... that... |
| books4me chapter 8 . 9/6/2005 This is so good! I can't wait to read about the party. Keep up the great work, * Books4mE * |
| Karuli chapter 8 . 9/5/2005 lol, hope you update soon. but i thot he was suppose to be really pretty. |
| HBRisRAD chapter 8 . 9/4/2005 yay! another update! it was a great chapter! cant wait for another update...updates make me happy! :) |
| Stella chapter 8 . 9/3/2005 haha i love it. its great and unique and creative and i love it! update soon |
| StedfastStar chapter 8 . 9/3/2005 I give up on reading this "story." The plot is confusing, and I have a hard enough time understanding who's who and where's where. I just hope that none of your future stories come out this way. Truly very sorry if I'm being too blunt, Sapphire Ink |
| StedfastStar chapter 7 . 9/3/2005 If you are going to speak on a cell phone, it's much, much easier to understand who's talking if you use actual names. There is no need to use screen names if it isn't an email or an IM chat. |
| StedfastStar chapter 6 . 9/3/2005 At least this chapter has *one* long email with actual paragraphs, dialogue, and character and setting descriptions. |
| StedfastStar chapter 5 . 9/3/2005 I guess the story *will* be composed entirely of extremely short emails. Considering the time it takes to send and receive an email, this story would have been better off (in a sense) as IM conversations. With the shortness of the messages and all, you could've just done your readers a favor and made everything in IM format. Or, better yet, keep the emails to a minimum (make them longer, and perhaps no more than 3 in a chapter) and write it in a proper story format, paragraphs, actual dialogue, and proper character and setting descriptions included. Again, this isn't a flame, but preferably constuctive criticism. |
| StedfastStar chapter 4 . 9/3/2005 Is this ENTIRE story going to be nothing more than short emails and IM conversations? It's kinda annoying, since I expected it to be a story, a properly written story. I mean, you *could* use emails as a story, provided they're long ones, but these emails are very, very short. This isn't a flame, just constructive criticism. |
| satinsmoke chapter 8 . 9/3/2005 yay! another great chapter. loved it much. im intensely jealous of eve at the moment. update soon! |
| Intelligent Ditz chapter 8 . 9/3/2005 Lol. I love the conversations between James and Alex... ah, territorial guys... gotta love 'em... ) UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
| jennycraig10 chapter 8 . 9/3/2005 Love it. update. |
| BadSweets chapter 8 . 9/3/2005 Ooh, so what shall happen in this part-ay? And Jamesie needs to dump the girl and sort out his school stuff. Seriously. Oh! I came across a cool(funny) story called 'Issues, Envelopes and Homophobes' on fictionpress. It's awesome, and the way the story is told reminds me of this one... It obviously has gayness (nothing gross so far, I'd say)in it, so if that offends... Anyway, here's the link . ?storyid1975786 |