Ooh... she found the blog... whoops. I hope you're planning to update LIB and Stalker soon... please? And I enjoyed the humor in this chapter- especially the line, "I waved, and most people waved back. The rest ignored me, didn’t see me, or gave me the middle finger." hehe...

heh! I live in Montana too just like the girl in your story. I was really glad to see that you actually know that we HAVE computers here. Most people still think that we live in shacks in the middle of woods carrying our rifles and chewing tabaco. It's a little annoying. So I officially love you. (AHEM not in that way)

ooh, the plot thickens...

This is the first time i have read a story where it is all emails and instant messaging...

Not that it is a bad thing. It is creative and original.

I'm really loving this. I hope that you continue soon. :D

oo i really lyk this story! its really cute..i lyk the whole email/IM thing 2..its different...n a good way ;) lol i cant wait 2 c how the party well hurry up & up8 it! lol

YES. An uopdate! Great chapter, of course. Ah...stupid writer's block! Fight it! ...Okay...that sounded stupid. Hahaha. OH...I wanna see the blog! Soudns cool, I hope you put it in the next chapter. Please, please, please don't let the writer's block get to you! This story is so funny, I love it!

yeah i 'm glad you wrote this chapter before you had writers block, i can't wait for the next chapter, i wanna know what happens at the party , update soon please!

Yay! Its not a cliff although I do like cliffs but they drive me crazy. The emails are very formal. Well not formal but like you know how when people chat, we don't use punctuation at all? But then in this you do. But if you did use it, some people might not get the shortcuts for letters. So its nice that you kept it this way to see how the person is actually typing and expressing their feelings. Great Job! and Update soon eh?-Elemantal Moon

Hey, Lyllien here with a changed pen name. I can't remember if I told you that. I've been trying to remember who I've told because some people have been getting confused as to who I am...

Anyway, the story. Very interesting. Can't wait for the party and see what happens with James/Eve/Alex.

Nice chapter. Alex is jealous. James in sneaky. Alice is a legend. And Maggie is...well undescribable (sp?) Anyway, update soon. Cheers,

storywritergirl xoxox

I love the format of this, the whole email/IM thing. It makes it more "real time" and more realistic than just talking about the actions from third person.

Parts of this (i.e. the "my sister's outside throwing shoes at a tree") had me laughing so hard. lol.

Keep writing!

OMG~ (::warning:: extreme gushing ) This is a masterpiece! Seriously! This was really clever, to do a story based on IMs, emails and texting. I've read some pieces which used the same format but noone pulled it off quite like you. When you write a story through letters,etc a writer is rather limited. You however managed to get the emotions across through the words. I LOVE IT! Each character is unique and sticks to their personality ~ character consistancy.

I love the humour, it's really cute! I love the conversations between Alex and his friend... i dunt remember his name right now, but the guy who was on his gf's sn at one point. Hehe Crazy how everyone knows and how word travels fast online. Everybody knows everybody _ but it's actually pretty true. LoLz~

Gosh... thankyou so much for that great read! *sighs happily* Happy writings! UPDATE SOON

hahaha i like being evil. example one: my fics D hmm i want to go to NYC now! seems like loads of fun... especially the rides and stuff. hmm party... and james with maggie. not a good combo. ick what'll happen when she goes back hah, alex will probably be squirming! alright, update soon amigo. until then, later days.

K, I think BOTH of them are jealous. Go James! Haha, LoL. Still, Eve kind of forgave Alex pretty quickly. Eve sounded like they had lots of fun together. So, party next chapter?

hey! this is awesome, u have a great style. i love these types of stories, where its all correspondence. kp it up, and update again soon,JB