Reviews for You've Got Mail |
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![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter. But you said "look" a whole bunch of times at the beginning with alex and eve. They didn't really feel like two different people. And I think the things that are being used as blackmail really aren't all that horrible/worht blackmailing with. But I can't wait for the update on the party! I wonder if there will be a fight between the boys...over...eve? or maggie? both? Or maybe they will be constantly missing each other in the crowd! lol |
![]() ![]() i agree with Alice... i wanna ride the boat! but if Alex was holding her from behind and such..it's like they're a couple. Is Eve still kinda naive? cause i think she has a bit of naive thing with her... |
![]() ![]() Ahahahha... you know what would be really funny? if alice met alex's cousin online... tht'd be great.. UPDATE SOON! -ti |
![]() ![]() ![]() JAMES? JAMES? wow... UPDATE SOON! -ti |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! (Okay, I know I should have read it ages ago... now that I have, I regret not doing so earlier.) Can't wait to read more, * Books4mE * |
![]() ![]() Hello, love! May I tell you I REALLY enjoyed this chapter, seeing as Alex's "nemesis" who happens to be the guy Maggie's cheating with is now wooing Eve? What a delicious plot twist! I love this story, and once again, am hoping you update quickly! |
![]() ![]() O things r heating up! woot! so...b sure to update soon and i cant wait 4 the next chap! _~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I've been catching up a little bit on my stories. (I'm doing the short chaptered ones first so it might be a while before I get to LIB) I got a LITTLE confused on this from the mobile IM names and stuff, but... okay. JAMES sounds interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() M m m! Good! Hehehe, sorry if after all those chapters of yours, I only made my review here. Anyways, can you please avoid the short terms coz sometimes it can be tricky to decode. Peace out! Muah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() one spelling mistake that i could find. just one. that is really good. fantastic beginning. it would be hard to continue in email format. congrats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() james eh? i sense trouble-a-brewing! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I've been waiting for this chapter for ages. i gotta hand it to you, you have a way for semi-drama. Example the whole James thing. Very clever. Waiting for more...still waiting...Cheers, storywritergirl xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, nice chapter. You did catch most of it, although you did have a " r u ok" which took me a moment to understand. Thanks though, it's much better. I'll watch for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're not seriously gonna have the whole fic in email and im mode, are you? ~dragonfly |