Reviews for i am the disease
M3741 W1NG5 Alex chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
Woah, very intense. I love it. I'm favoriting this. I'm pretty much speechless, keep writing!
Arkash chapter 1 . 5/7/2005

This poem somehow brought to the surface all my fears. Fears of biowarfare. Don't ask me why, I don't know.

Even if that's not what you intended, you're good.

sweety167 chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Wow. It's very captivating. That touch of social commentary puts a wonderful spin on it.
breakdown in the waiting room chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
i envy your ability to describe things. your descriptions are so different, unique, always vivid. there's this very classy tone to your poetry, but you still keep such a good wit, and a properly imroper, lol, sense of humor. an elegant smirk. and you always have these lines, in every poem, that just. . .personify it ALL. say you suck at poetry again and i will have to make you listen to britney spears non-stop until you realise .talented! -jess
hmmmmm chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
this is gorgeous. i love all your references and how perfect they are...
SilverSpinner chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
Ooh, I like this one.

"it's very hard to tell/the treasures of neuroses hidden in quicksand"

Yes it is.
shola chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Okay this'll have to be my last one for today because I've a lab report to write. Fantastic. Like the 1911 irish boxing reference, very well the way the piece is worded, it just sort of picks up momentum without tripping up over itself, which is difficult in write
Joewhatever chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
GAHDAH! That was crazy-good! I loved it! etc, etc. Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous! I favorite this now...amazing..
Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Actually if you go to the log-in, and then favorite authors and type the author's ID in the little window you can add it and thwart the system :D I feel evil, but, hey, it works.
hadrian's wall chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Ah, it bites! I love it, Brittany.

"it hits me low like a prizefighter in an irish 1911 streetmatch with saliva screaming bloody murder"

I LOVE that line! So vivid!
twenty-second seduction chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
i love it. it's so flowing and beautifully written but at the same time it still has some crude power in it.

APersonAndAHalf chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
This is powerful. Each word seems full of venom. Gotta love it.
asyousaid chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
This is rather beautiful actually... it's such a divine expression of vulnerability, I really like it.
Momentary Sins chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
wondrous. absolutely, there are no imperfections, for anythings that isnt perfect is beautiful anyways.
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
i love this. the beginning reminded me of a micheal jackson special that was recently on vh1. did you happen to see that? anyway, this was great, it just sucked you in.
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