Reviews for Lying Next to him
Woody S chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Just glancing at the list of poems you have here, this was the first one to jump out at me. I like it. I think it's quite powerful. I like the way you always seem to refer back to the constant need for "him", whoever he may be to just protect you. A great piece. I loved it.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
aw... how sweet~i wish i had a place to run to, like you do~~keep writing!
emotional-Teen chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Awesome... kinda reminds me of how i help my lover. Really kewl thou.
Frootkake Productions chapter 1 . 2/2/2005