Wait, where'd he go? NICKY! Go back, I say, back! I have no idea where he disappeared to, but this story was so sweet and yet bittersweet at the same time. She loved him and he went out with other girls. So depressing!

Wow, V. That was cool. It reminded me of when I start writing and sentences spit out that I have no idea where they came from and it makes sense to me...but then someone else reads and they're like, "huh?"

But because I think we're somehow long lost relatives with funky minds, I understood every word and love it! lol

So...I think Nicky could have been her imaginary friend she dreamed about, but no...I think he died. I think he knew he was dying. Hmm...no...maybe he just had to get up and go take a leak behind the school building!

kidding...

I liked the story as a whole, it really does have a strange, rather detached feeling to it. The one part I didn't like was the part with Nicky and the women in the bar. I don't know exactly why though, it just seemed kind of odd, but don't take it the wrong way, I don't like a lot of things for no reason. I liked the ending a lot, really makes you think.

I liked it...very descriptive...I think he maybe was an angel, or a ghost. I prefer angel, though.