|Reviews for Seedling|
| THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Good flow and great poem.
| avani.awakening chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Really different and abstract. It sounds like you had some kind of weird dialogue in your head and you turned it into a poem. It's good; a bit long, but the metaphor at the end is clear without being too blatant.
| DELETE DELETE DELETE ACCOUNT chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
LOVE IT! cute, understanding, love, classical convo between parent and child, good job!