Reviews for Maybe Now
Thyrt chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
that was really good..it gave me chills to read because i've felt that way so much, thankx for your review too:D
insertterriblypoeticlinehere chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
First off, thanks for the review.

Secondly, I just want to point at that some mistakes were made with grammar. 'Nothing make it disapear,' should be 'nothing makes it disapear.' 'The feelings just keep coming back,' not 'keeping coming back,' etc. Just to be nitpicky

Otherwise, it has feeling, and is easily relatable. Good job.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
wow, interesting peom, very intense in emotionsi liked!keep writing!
Kailah Lea chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Great poem. I'm sorry about whatever happened, it sucks to feel like that. Keep writing!Kailah Lea
officialmuse chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
thanks for reviewing my poem. of curiosity i read this one and i really liked it ur a great writer from what i can see. Ur poem kinda sounds like somthing i would write. thanks again
mormonboy chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Hay you poem just rocks! keep up the great work. I love this poem, it expresses depression so clearly, and greatly, and I know the fealing. I am adding such a great author to my favorites.
Frootkake Productions chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
You write good poems. Keep up the good work! I MISS YOU! haha Constructive, eh?
Isil Oronr chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Even though it didn't have much of a rhyming sceme or rythem patterm, I like the feeling with has to it. Its something some or most can relate to.