|Reviews for The shunned|
| Sock Ninja chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
I think you have an excellent idea, excellent form, etc. Only flaw I can find is to work on your spelling, but FictionPress has a dictionary up top (Dictionary link) and no offense but when you said 'scenes' it's 'since', 'though' is 'threw'. Meh, took me forever to get those... damn you english language!