this story is absolutely amazing!

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

you can't leave it right when they're at the train station!

FINISH IT!

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“I hate women. They’re all fucking bananas.”

oh my God, i think thats probably the first time a guy calls a woman a banana, its hilarious! the story started out so serious and all i could think was this is so sad...and then after michelle leaves, he calls her a bitch and then this line and icant stop laughing. i just had to review. this line is so going to be one of my favourite quotes!

I'd always been an avid reader of your other story until the updates were no longer as frequent. Recently, I stumbled across this story, and even though I have a tendency to never read stories that aren't finished, I said, what the heck, her other story is fantastic, this should be as well. So, then, I started reading this story, and since then I've been hooked.

Unfortunately, there haven't been updates in a long while. Of course you must be busy, but I'm still hanging here on a thread for both of your stories, and as a reader and appreciator or writing, as cheesy as that sounds, I'm hoping to persuade you to continue writing both of your stories. This was one just getting really really good. I was so excited to see more interaction between Luke and Miel, but you've left us sort of on a cliffhanger... which I can totally handle, but not for an entire year.

If you've decided to stop writing your two stories, please let us know so we won't be left hanging on a thread especially since your stories are so brilliantly written. I'd love to see both of your stories finished, and hopefully this long review, though not exactly on the chapter will persuade you. I love the interaction between Miel and Luke in this story, as well as in your Living with the Devil. I seriously hope you consider finishing both of the stories, but totally respect your wishes if you decide to stop writing, please just let us know.

Thanks so much,

ChineseCanadian4

Oh my goodness I love this story. Lucas would be magnificent were he a real person. Anyway please oh please update soon.

Lol, Jason did not say the dog was very hot, he said his dog's very drunk. I guess that's appropriate too. *giggles* Grade 10 french flash back (I do live in Canada).

Judy: Ray est tres chaud.

Ray (who is from montreal): It's all because of your party last night.

Judy: huh?

Mme Farrel: *shakes her heads and gives up*

Good Chapter though!

~Lily

Ah Geez. I hope you update this awesome story soon.

i thought you have the rest of the plot figured out already.. what's taking so long? the fic is good. way good. and i really like them and i feel in love with the characters already. even pierre.. and i think you got the inpiration of adam spence from albus dumbledore from harry potter! i mean.. they're both old.. and manipulative.. using people as ches players for their own schemes.. not taht i hate dumbledore or anything..so can you please end this fic once and for all so i can finally have peace of mind.. last night.. i was wondering and wondering what will happen next... you should have that in your conscience!

O...I like this, this reminds me of a new and hip version of something that is comparable to The Da Vinci Code... which means, this rocks! I love your writing, please please please update soon!

Wow, I love this story. It's so cute. And I love how you've developed Lucas and Miel's personalities/characters. Very interesting. However, I am extremely disappointed about the plot! This has the potential of becoming a pretty kick-ass action/adventure story, I think. I know you've put it primarily in the Romance category (so, of course, it mainly revolves around the two lovers), bu , MAN! I'm not sure what you're planning for future chapters, but I think you've been dwadling around what could be an excellent mystery/action thing. You have snippets of it in your subplot here and there, but the story seems to be mainly focused on Lucas and Miel contemplating each other (which, no offense, is getting boring, cute as they are). I don't know, you're keeping the reader in the dark for too long and it's getting frickin annoying and jeez, I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT THIS WHOLE COMPUTER CRIMINAL THING! I notice you haven't updated this for almost(ish) a year. Maybe giving the story a stronger plot with Miel's criminal computer stalker (starting from around the beginning instead of in the middle/end-ish) would motivate you and keep the story rolling along splendidly. So basically:1. "OMG, does she like me?"/"OMG, does he like me?" -great, but I felt you were overdoing it.2. Stronger subplot...3. I fucking love your story. I love the science-y aspect. I love the characters. I love your descriptions. I love the humor.

Toodles.

Disclaimer: Just my opinions. Your story is fine and awesome as it is right now also.

haha! love it so much! make sure you update soon!

Oh my gosh! This is such an awsome story I literally am on my second day reading it (non-stop thank you -VERY- much

Wow, I love this story! Please, please, please don't give up on this and update soon!

Amazing start. Simply amazing. I can totally predict (not in a bad way, in a very anticipatingish and exicited way) what will happen from your excellent, eye-catching summary and strong beginning. I've only read chapter 1 and I know this is going to rock! Teeheheehe I loved this so much I had to review sorry it doesn't have much substance-the first chap was short

I love the end especialy. "Bananas"? Hahaha. That's definitely a first. I love this Lucas character already!

hey. dont' know if you remember this story, but i and others truly enjoyed it and would like for it to continue. so maybe (if you read this) you could maybe update. It would make me really happy since the last two weeks of my life have been crappy. Please update soon!

Love, love, love, love, LOVE this story! Miel is so cool and Lucas is so.. amazing. And hot. Hehe :) Update again soon please!xx