Cool story! It's nice that you know what you're talking about when it comes to quantum physics. Even though I have no clue what you're talking about half the time. So you could be making it up...in which case, you're really believable.

I like your characters a lot. They're funny and real.

How do you pronounce Miel's name? Is it like meal? or Mi-L? or something else? It's just bugging me a little, that's all.

Hope you update soon!

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I love your story so far! It's dramatic but really really well-written. I like how your characters are realistically flawed, too, and I love how you bring in the physics aspect of the job, too. It gives it flavor, like it's not just a cliche romance, but it's real. The one chapter that I would comment on as "pushing" the romance a little would be when they went swimming in the lake. Miel seems like a way stronger person than she is in that chapter (chapter 13) and it's kind of far-fetched to ME that she would be such a damsel-in-distress. It seemed to me that that scene was just to bring them closer, but it was a little too forced for me. Anyways, other than that, great job. Update soon :)

hey, quick question, do you like 'the oc'? because i think i've seen a few last names that are the same as some on the show... just wondering. anyways, i also wanted to know if something bad is going to happen to lucas' project because you seem to be hinting it, since lucas and jason are keeping it a secret, and they're taking a break on it. i'm also still confused over this whole miel and people blackmailing her kind of thing. lucas better show up at the train station too! lol cya

I love it! The plot's interesting, the characters are great, and I'm completely engrossed in what's going to happen.

I liked how Lucas did a total 180 since the story began, but you still retained the characteristics that made him Lucas.

And Miel sounds really cool... but how do you pronounce her name?

Anyway, great story, and I can't wait for more!

I'm glad you're back please update again soon. Your other story is great but i reall love and missed this one. Please Update soon!

Brill story. But I really wonder what Miel's doing... That Spence was the one who threatened her seems very likely. But what did she do to his computer? Why does she suddenly want to take leave?Great story. Can't wait to read more. :)

ooh update soon

its so nice to see an update with this story- i cant wait for another!

Haha... A very cool stroy all about physics and science experiments. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wonderful!

Hey I really like this story. I read your other one and i clicked on your page and found this one. Do you still continue with it?

It's absolutely lovely, I LOVE Miel, she's so cool. Please continue?

I am so glad that you're back. I love this story and i loved this chapter. Please, Please post more soon. thanks

aw, it was so cute! and after reading such great chap, my choice is vocab is just "cute"! well, i am sleepy, so pls forgive me about that, cant think of nice adjectives when i lack sleep, LOL. anyways, i love this story to death and pls update it soon!

Gosh, Luke is so hot! I want a bf like him! LOL! IT was so sweet, the kissing and confessions, etc. Love the story

OMG OMG OMG! It was awesome! Love this story!