Reviews for Favorite Deity
Rachelle Spirit Boyens chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
You say you're not making fun of Christians. You're right. It's sort of... mocking all religions. I think it's funny, but... I see the serious side too. And I think a lot of people agree with you on this. Very nice poem.
Tenshi1 chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
it's rather interesting. and i can understand how a 'christian' might take it the wrong way. sometimes it is as though the divine just begs us to question the reality of our existance, let alone theirs'- i don't know if it was ment in this way, but in several places the diety's perspective changes as well as in what the reader is urdged to do. The entire poem has a unique twist...
Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Hm. I don't understand what you're trying to get at with this. It appears to me as if your point of view changes a few times...but then again, it might just be me being confoosed. Which would be very much like me. _;