Reviews for Striving
firemounrain chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
I like the use of the word "striving." It's always had connotations for me.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
I actually really like this, especially the ending and the simplicity of chorus. good stuff.
Cobster chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
It is sort of cryptic, but at the same time I can tell what it's about. Lyrics (good ones, anyway) just have a way of exaggerating themselves. These seem a little exaggerated. That is to say, these are good lyrics. A couple lines that are a little cliched, I think, such as "into the depression zone" and "my inflicted and broken heart." I like the chorus, though.

The verses are all pretty good, too.