Reviews for Into the Dark
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
This is really beautiful and so sad. I don't know what else to say, everytime I read one of your poems, I'm just stunned. _ Yes, I really like this.

Much love,

Rosanna.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
i like this too, a tad more depressing but its still good
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Beautiful imagery in this one. I really admire your poems. Keep up the great work! Vix
Ciaro chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
It feels unfinished. You started the poem with a whole swell of energy, and that continued till the last line. It just does not feel complete to me.

Then again, you are it's maker. If your point was to make this have an aprupt ending, you did make that. A half of an action.

-Ciaro