Reviews for Caution: Wet Floors
slothqueen851 chapter 1 . 2/14
I liked the story :) can i see the picture?
Lady Seratopia chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Awesome
eskimoxisses chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Different.

The guy's language was kind of askew and awkward in the way that it seemed too formal then transferred to perverted. Little weird.

Loved her rant though; thanks for bringing it to fictionpress.

Made me think of Wizard of Oz? Or something with a witch that drowns. Or that he pisses himself :) XDD
thisaccountisdeadNOW chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
may I see the picture that you drew?
BlueDolphinz chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
very nice. i loved the view you took- when men are told what they really are, they go all insecure, and from being all strong they just become puddles- weak. interesting point, and very well written.
Haruku chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
This...oneshot was...amazingly good...!

It's simple enough to catch my attention, and very pretty.

I know, I know. Who would describe a man melting as pretty?

I just loved the last few parts:

"She threw her drink on top of what was left of him and stormed away, finally feeling free from the weight that had been shut in for so long.

A sign sat innocently near the puddle that had once been a man. On its yellow self, in bold black letters it read: Caution: Wet Floors."

It's truly amazing(yes, I'm aware I have a very limited vocab. but pft) and I'm surprised that this story didn't get reviewed more often.
Lady Katreina chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Dude. That. Was. Awesome.

-THANK YOU!-
the littlest sakura chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
it's intruiging, i like it. might i see the picture?
x.your.brand.new.mistake.x chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
Interesting and different...God bless!
Pretty Girls Make Graves chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Huh, I just noticed I never reviewed this story (even though I've read it several times.)

I'd love to see the picture!

My email is in my profile. You pick the best topics to write about.
Xock chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
o, hey, tis me again. I would love to see that picture! you;ve got my email, right?

kudos, dear. I loff the story.
tnman chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Haha, that was a very interesting and entertaining read. I hope I never have to melt into a puddle!

Good thing all men aren't like that, even if it may seem like it. :P
Eva Lilac chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Well. Certainly interesting to know that if you tell a man what you think of him, he'll turn into a puddle. I'll remember that.

Please send me the link (via email), I'd like to see it.
Suzie chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Wow. That went deep. Please send me the link - I'd love to see the picture.
scissor sex chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
very very VERY satisfactory

please send me the pic!
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