Reviews for I'm Egyptian
cauchemar chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
I really liked this, but some aspects of it made me wonder if it was a parady at all...or maybe just pointing out the irony? I wasn't really sure about that...Maybe it was the simplistic language and rhyming that made me think so...I'm not mocking it, really, I was just a tad confused. I do love your poetry,honestly! I hope you don't think I was trying to be mean...
Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Good poem, but why do you switch back and forth with "I'm Egyptian" and "We're Egyptian?" Just asking...
Typewriter King chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
Leaders take credit for construction they pay for. Case in point, the hardhat engineers didn't get credit for... Trump Tower. Yeah, slaves like the Jews, Nubian tribesmen, maybe, and others enslaved by the pharaohs were the actual laborers.
suzieque2 chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Did the Egyptians build the Spinx or did the slaves build it for them? Inteteresting and thought provoking poem. You could do more of these, from points of view of other lesser characters in the Bible too :-)I'd like to see one about the girlfriend of Jeremiah.