|Reviews for The Scenery Of Your Melancholy|
| shea's surrender chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
hey, guess what! I'm still alive and reviewing, when things slow down!-yay-
I like this one a lot. It seems almost like something my friend would say when he was thinking about me. Which is why I'm pretty close to tears. But yeah. The style is either a new thing with you, and I just haven't been reading enough, or it's new and fun and creative! Either way, it's awesome, it really captures how sometimes thoughts that are linked closely with emotions can be repetitive. *applause* I really like the second stanza, that's where it really broke through to me (*sheepish laugh*), and, as always, you end with a bang!
-insert explosion here-
hehe... awesome poem. Sorry I disappeared. Back to reviewing!