|Reviews for Being Home|
| avani.awakening chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
Once again with the snazzy lines surrounded by...well, OK lines. Very sad and sounds like something else you wrote once, I don't know what.
| Tangerine Tickle chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
Quite a heartwarming and pleasurable read. :) The only advice I must give is that you add punctuation; I was getting lost every now and then. ;) Write on!
PS: If you have the time, I encourage you to check ou : / / w w w . (you will not be disapointed!).