|Reviews for I'm listening|
| SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
"And it was only her cure"...
I think that you are right.
| Mango Motercycle chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Charissa i love you! boys are sucky! don't let him bring you down, the bastard...good job mallory wih the poem!
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
this is beautiful...really captures the feelings and emotions so well...i know how this is and can relate a lot...very well said i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
P.S.~~thanks for the review appreciate it.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
i can completely relate.. very powerful and beautifully written
| braggart chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
Your poetry shows much promise, as you seem to be teetering right between good and great.
You do tend to fall into a few cliches.
But I really love the line... "of his shy and easy kiss." That is so evocative. Good work.