Reviews for It started with a Deal
Lleaves chapter 3 . 7/31/2005
Hey. I like your story here! Update it please? I'm hooked.
hersheykiss chapter 3 . 7/23/2005
This is a great story too, but i'll have to say my all time favorite is All Along. But you've got to update soon because i'm waiting for read BOTH stories! It's so interesting! Please please please put up another chapter! ]
Lightning Storm chapter 3 . 7/18/2005
I just read your story that time, and I must say that I love it. Your ability to write is amazing. Update soon.
Maroon chapter 3 . 7/17/2005
I read your profile and it said you found it difficult to find a decent stpry that was cliched and well written! I so agree. I mean there are loads of cliched stories but most are poorly written. This however is not so i loved it!

Yuhuh I love cliches too! You already have 160 reveiws for three chapters! well done thats pretty damn good. I can see this is gonna be one of those cliched good fictions that gets loads and loads of reveiws!

I really enjoyed these first 3chapters yeh they were written in a style that it fairly familiar but well written! Yeh im kinda guessing whats gonna happen...but well im interested as to why he wants a girlfriend? something was mentioned about his parents earlier...

Hmm i can tel like many good ones this is not gonna be straight forward! Keep it up! Waiting for next chapter!

Love maroon
kittybro chapter 3 . 7/17/2005
Lol this was funny! Please update!
justaregulargirl chapter 3 . 7/15/2005
hey, i just read your story, and i'm really liking where it's going right now, and i hope you update soon!
windvane chapter 3 . 7/11/2005
so...when are you gonna be updating?:)can't wait:)forgive my impatience.

anyway,... what was up with katrina's step brother? did he call up his step sister just when he was about to do some crazy things with whoever that female voice belonged to? not normal...

so adrien's beginning to "feel" for katrina, eh? *smirk* i like this story. in spite adrien's really ugly personality, i like him already.

and katrina? well, i wouldn't want to be in her shoes... but i wouldn't mind:)
murfdurf22 chapter 3 . 7/11/2005
hey! when are you going to update this story, since you haven't updaed All Along in a while, i started to read your other stroy, ISWAD, and i loved it, but you havent updated it in months, whats the deal? please update soon. please email or something, to know if you're going to be updating it soon?
Anywhere but here chapter 3 . 7/9/2005
i've been reading ur other story and i think this ones pretty good too...the only thing that i can criticize is when ur doing the diff. pov don't overlap them as much, like it's good to know how the characters tick but yu dun't wanna reveal everything ... am i making sense? ... newas ttyl
Kelly chapter 3 . 7/8/2005
okay, you totally can't just leave us like that! in simpler words: UPDATE. NOW. haha seriously. This is very interesting and you must update soon! I love your writing style. Keep up the great work!
Melissa chapter 3 . 7/5/2005
HEY. I'm a fan of this story now, too. SO UPDATE SOON! .
marina eyes chapter 3 . 7/4/2005
this is an awesome story - both this and All Along are fantastic.

Please please please update soon.
Shyin chapter 3 . 7/2/2005
I like it, the party will be interesting. You have some wierd typos in the chapters though you might want to read through them. In some places i think you left out some words too. Great Story!
Dina Rogoziansky chapter 3 . 7/2/2005
oh sorry. i thought the last chapter was as far as you'd writtrn so far. but anyways. update plz! i love this story so far.
Dina Rogoziansky chapter 2 . 7/2/2005
update! update plz!
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