Reviews for It started with a Deal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story but i pursuade you to finish all along ch. 16 before you do this chapter so hurry up with both! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I really like this story, It keeps you interested.I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute fic, i think you're writing at your best here, the characters personalities are well intact, and the storly plot is orginal... hope you can update soon! muchLUB-kerr |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah i really like this story please update soon! cant wait to read about the deal. |
![]() ![]() I have been looking for this story! I just happenned to be reading All Along, and I realized you wrote this, too! Well, I'm glad you updated, and I hope you continue both stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so who exactly is Adrien Price?why can't kat just ask her step dad for money?nywayz, luv ur story n update soon!luv SnowAngelz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey hey, I'm back! (repeatedly reviewed ur story All Along - love it, btw, and I'm sure I'll love this too, once it gets going). So now all you have to do is write more! (PLEZ? - begging, here - post soon! ;-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adrien is pretty typical right now and a story needs strong characters to leave an impressionpossible during the date, the two of them can have some "quality" conversations and Katrina can show the "unique side" of her please update quickly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't understand...why did you stop writing? It was going so well and beautiful and you just died on us. UPDATE DAMMIT! lol Great Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What? That's it? So you leave us with that? Bloody hell woman/man (sorry, i've no idea, your username doesn't help), are you trying to kill some people? *Sigh* This is why i hate fictionpress, the stories are always unfinished! |
![]() ![]() dude...UPDATE ALREADY...GEEZ o_0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's going to happen during the date, huh? Is Kat and Adrien going to start bickering again? Please update! You can't just leave us like this! Lol...I love your story...going to check out All Along now... |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol...interesting story. Keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, haha, I'm slow, I've only just finished reading the 3 chapters you've posted for this. (can I hope that summer will do wonders for this story too? ) yeah, I like it. haha, and urm, yeah. I would've thought that maybe they would have to have an "information session" though. So that they know some basics bout each other. How're they going to fake that they're together when they don't know nuts bout each other? haha. Adrien does want his "fake girlfriend" to be seen as his real one right? That totally won't happen the way the two of them are going about it p adds more spice to the story though! haha. I'm looking forward to them interacting with each other, and other people at the party! Let's see how they carry it off. heh! haha, and shouldn't he be taking her to buy a dress? What if she doesn't have one? Not too bright on his part, I think. |
![]() ![]() omg! this has got to be the best story ever! u HAVE to update more heheheh i can't wait |