Reviews for It started with a Deal
cariluv chapter 3 . 5/8/2005
This is really good, I can't wait for more!
slowlydancingtothestars chapter 3 . 5/7/2005
update soon please!
Slideshow chapter 3 . 5/6/2005
This story is seriously cute. Lol, I've been racking through my brains, trying to figure out a proper adjective, and cute was what I settled for.

I'm not much of an avid reader on FP anymore, but I do read short stories once in awhile, and since your story only had three chapters and I was a bit curious about the turnouts... I read it. And instead of discarding it, now that my entertainment purpose has been fulfilled, I think I'm gonna stick around for the next few chapters. My curiousity is getting the better of me and I must really find out whats so damn suspicious about the party they're planning to attend.

I like the story so far. Interesting with a slight humorous edge to it. Keep it up, hun.

update whore chapter 3 . 5/5/2005
btw...i saw the movie "100 days with mr. arrogant" me. your story is WAY better. i saw that movie, and i hope i will never have to go through torture like that again. that movie BLOWS. it SUCKS ASS. i wouldn't watch it if someone PAID me. (well, actually i WOULD... if they paid a LOT. but w/e...heh.) but just letting you know...this story is WAY better. god...i hate that movie so much the main character is SO GAY! G.A.Y.! fuck the director! fuck the fugly actors! was a TOTAL waste of time...arghlkdjf;alkjf!

whew. *breathe in, breathe out*. sorry. this was supposed to be a review for your story..but i turned it into a hate rant about a movie. :(

i like your story though :D a lot :) please update...though i like the neely one more :P
update whore chapter 2 . 5/5/2005
haha...pretty funny :D
scissor sex chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
He reminded me of one of those Chad Michael Murray boys that girls gushed over….except that this guy looked even better.

GOOD. because i hate Chad Michael Murray...ugly as sin. xD k, maybe not (please, if you are a fan don't murder me). but he is *really* overrated.

hehe...i didn't want to read this story because it only had three chapters...your stories are always addicting, and if i read this before you got to AT LEAST ten chapters, i knew i would DIE from the waiting...but i couldn't help me because i am waiting for the neely/devon story! (gar please update quick *tear*) i'm reading this. i'm not even finished with the chapter but it's pretty good :)

lighthearted, easy to read. :D
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
Good start. Initially seems to be more intelligent than your other fic, however, 'All Along' got better - let's hope this one does too :)
Grape chapter 3 . 5/2/2005
This is really awsome...Adrien is a jerk! Really he is, and blaming her for HER attitude...jesh! But your writing is amazing! You just seem to flow into the really awsome! Hope the next chapter of both your stories comes soon.
pinkisyourfriend chapter 2 . 5/1/2005
i love your story...yeah...that's all i really have to say
katieee chapter 3 . 5/1/2005
interesting story. update soon.
null acount delete chapter 3 . 4/30/2005
we eventually get more, right?
books4me chapter 3 . 4/29/2005

Interesting story. I definitely prefer "All Along" so far, 'cause it really rocks, but this seems to be turning into something quite interesting too.

I've noticed a certain theme to your stories...

I look forward to reading more,

* Books4mE *
LilLaTLuv chapter 3 . 4/26/2005

I liked this chapter actually! Great work!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/25/2005
when are you going to update this story?its good ]
tarnished chapter 3 . 4/25/2005
Arrogant? The first thing that came to my mind was 'dickhead.' He seriously needs help, I hope Katrina gives him hell and shows him what shes made of. Ooh, even better, I hope she shows up at the party looking so beautiful Adrien bites his own tongue off in shock. That would have me laughing for days.

This is good, I hope you update soon!
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