Reviews for It started with a Deal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start to the story. I thought their argueing was a bit over the top and a bit dragged out, but the plot seems like its got potential. Can't wait to see what happens next. Pls do update soon! |
![]() ![]() Yay! Cool stuff... i cant wait till the next chapter.(hope it's soon) 0) |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story so far :) update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adrien . . . is an asshole. OOPS! Sorry, forgive my language. Um. Yeah, great story. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() just recommending a really good story... . ?storyid1426610...and twin trouble by the same author...cya...and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha. My friend says 'I have to go' all the time. It's so funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was such an awesome chap! i luv this story! haha i like how adrien gets all angry every time katrina says 'pedophile', lol. wow u have tons of reviews and ur only on the 3rd chap! plz plz update quicker this time, just cuz i need to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow 96 reviews and ur barely on ur 3rd chap, thats amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() The premise is an oldie but a goodie. The writing was good, the problem is with me and not you. I really don't like stories with POV changes. It makes the story choppy, but I shall not quite on account of that! When I get the chance I'll review your other story! Cool? Nice job! |
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![]() ![]() like i said review all awesome thingys which is like all of them |
![]() ![]() I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES... though my comp hasnt been working so i coulndt review... BUT I'LL GO REVIEW THEM NOW UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE heheheheheheheheheehe _~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() o nice..this story has great potential! i like katrina heehee shes a tad like me. Alrighty well update soon so the deal can commence! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. This is going to be an awesome story. I can tell...I know these things...Update ALL your stories soon, please! *hugs*Ta! |