Reviews for It started with a Deal |
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![]() ![]() "And without a fleeting glanceā¦.I drove away from the girl who meant nothing to me." MUAHAHAHA i just know something's going on there...NYAAHAHAHH! ok... If you ask for my opinion..which u didnt.. I LOVED IT! write more.. *off to read ur other stories* |
![]() ![]() Must...leave..short..review...to read... next chapter.. |
![]() ![]() Sorri I didn't review earlier... I was on the second paragraph before my mom saw my not so passing math testS...dam... So yeah. The review starts here : OMIGAWD! OMIGAWD! OMIGAWD! I feel like thats the only word I know right now. It was like the PERFECT first chapter. I loved it... Just like all the rest of them. Me go off to read next chappie..BWHAHAHA...k |
![]() ![]() ![]() it usually takes me about mroe than 5 chapters to actually like a story but you already got me hooked on just the first chapter! I LOVE THIS STORY! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol his head is so big that it's so going to burst. ah i can't wait to see the party Something happened in Adrien's childhood? Coz he reacts quite extremely to that word: pedophile~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start. So he is some kind of absolutely rich heir that is rebellious... ah, well hopefully Katrina has a lot of back bone, and make the deal worth it *reads next chap* |
![]() ![]() Hey. Okay, I really liked All Along so I decided to read this story, but I don't really like this story. You used all these stereotypes when, in real life, many of these stereotypes aren't true. In Adrien's case, the stereotype is, of course, very, very true since hot guys are ALWAYS arrogant. But, in Katrina's case, there are no semi-cute girls in my school who are utter nerds...and no one goes to the library... |
![]() ![]() ![]() great update! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great interaction between Adrien and katrina. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() really like this story! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love love love this story and how it's turing out! geez, wonder whats with aj's parents and stuff? lol. update soon (of course not before you update All Along! - which you have to do and soon!) lots of luv,kate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() luv! update soon! ~Sage |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm... im not exactly SURE whast gonna happen... i dont like the swearing (hint hint) and i dont really like adriens charactor either... but it was pretty good... keep it up... by the way, i REALLY like ur long chapters :D theres actually something there to read :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() another chapter down! yay! rejoice! i feel like smacking adriend silly. like with a spatula, evn maybe. love the story! please update soON! |
![]() ![]() i would have to say adrien is my fave character... he just seems so charismatic and aloof at times, you know? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool, liked it. It clearly proves the saying "don't judge a book by its cover" lol. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |