Reviews for It started with a Deal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello again! Nah, the story is moving just right, it's great! I'm liking the characters more and more and the vocabulary you use is AWESOME! Woah, can't wait to read more, again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I like how this is going...Please update soon :) I must find out what happens with Katrina...she sounds like a really interesting character. Very...real. Anyway, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story! ) It's got...originality. LOL i love the line “I’m not buying you, woman!” My temper could not be held. “I…I’m….using you!” She frowned. “And that sounds so much better….”hahah that was hilarious. KEEP IT UP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is an amazing story! i love it! keep writing and i'll keep reviewing! i love the personality of Kat, is she based off of anyone? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhs, gotchas on the spelling! lol! Excellent chapter. Poor Adrien. Or is it poor Kat? Either case great chapter! Update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA! I LOVE IT! Update soon _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good beginning so please continue this story *puts on a pleading look*. Update soon even through u only have 15% of the next chapter done. Oh and the guy Arien so arrogance he totally thinks he's all THAT. Sam |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW.I'm in love with the main character already. They are all amazing really. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ur characters are really interesting :P at least they're not the typical nerdy-goody girl or attractive-superduper kind of a guy... if ur familiar with korean movies, ur story sounds like the 100 days wiht Mr. arrogant. :p haha! maybe as a twist, katrina and the jared guy end up together? :p just a thought... hope that you wont forget updating ur other fic! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey this is cool, can't wait to read more chapters so i can really get into |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! This is a great beginning for a story! I enjoyed reading it so far, and you gotta update quickly! I like Katrina! The quiet types And Adrien... who exactly is he? |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah! your stories are so addictive! youshould update soon... |
![]() ![]() I liked it, sounds like it is going to be good. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() great fics. perfect mix of reality and drama. good names too. love the plots of both stories and update soon~! |