Reviews for It started with a Deal
mint chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
im luvin dis story but plz update son!
Nelly29 chapter 3 . 10/24/2005
love the story! update soon
angelll chapter 3 . 10/22/2005
please update? i really like where this is going.
Nicole chapter 3 . 10/21/2005
All I can say about the pic of Adrien you posted is: Oh. My. God.

lol. Good choice.

Update because I want to find out about their night!
YEAH chapter 2 . 10/15/2005
PLEAZ FINISH IT IM DYING OVER HERE PLEAZTHANX
a chapter 3 . 9/17/2005
hey! just wanted to tell you that this is a really cool story! hahah pedophile! hes like aorund her age and she calls him a pedophile! lol anyway i hope that you update soon coz id like to see what happens at the party and the whole meet the parents bit!keep up the good work update SOON
Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 3 . 9/15/2005
Tee hee, when I saw this I was like, my god!:“Why the sudden change of heart?” Change of heart? I think not….it was more like change of MIND...That is almost exactly the same context that was used in Disney's Anastasia (I heart that movie) except mind and heart was changed around. It was in a conversation b/ween the old Grand Dutchess and Dimitri. Brilliant story, btw!Have a nice day!
minute-glass chapter 3 . 9/12/2005
i can't wait to read about how the night of the party's going to be like. :D i think i love this story as much as All Along :) i was just wondering though, since you haven't updated for months now, are you going to finish this story? please do because you're an awesome writer and this story is really good! :D
emptyword chapter 3 . 9/10/2005
erg...Yeah, Adrien is quite the cocksure jerk. I'm not liking him very much at this point. Katrina on the other hand possesses spirit. I'm curious to see where this is heading.
anonymouschelce chapter 3 . 9/6/2005
I love this story! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!
simple-teen chapter 2 . 8/31/2005
Cool, I like it so far. Can't wait till it get's farther. Katrina's hilarious
The Big Pimpin Pimple chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
This first chapter is perfect...I like it better then your other story already not that u should stop updating All Along. anyways i have two more chapters to read so great job (applause
Tii Jay chapter 3 . 8/25/2005
jeez.. can those two be anymore stubborn? first he wants her to do the deal, but she resfuses... then she agrees, but he interrogates. -sigh- how incredibly annoying. but, i DO have to say that i'm loving it. and it's based on riverside. _

i love the story line and everything, but i sort of got a headache. don't get me wrong, because i love how long your chapters are LONG... but i got a headache from just reading 3 chapters. and by the way, i seriously cracked up on how adrien couldn't get over the fact that she called him a pedophile. at first, i was thinking, "why would she be thinking that he was a pedophile when she was just checking him out and thinking that he was a god of a man... meaning that he wasn't so old to begin with." lol

-tii jay

-tii jay
Tii Jay chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
oh wow... the riverside library? i LIVE in riverside. and i go to the library every one in a while... lol. i didn't i'd find anyone here writing about riverside. but i DO have to say that i enjoyed this chapter. so i'm off to read the rest.

-tii jay
MelisSy chapter 3 . 8/22/2005
Looking forward to how this story plays out. Please keep writing! BTW, does Adrien have some horrid past dealing with pedophiles? It just seems like he's freaking out too much.
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