|Reviews for Love's Unfortunate Timing|
| Princess Bk chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Hi ... is this the story? I had forgotten about it and then i found an email .. and i came here to check it out. You wrote it. Wow. And in the early 1900's. Well done. You are really talented. Good on you. :)
| ree chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
so far, i like this story and i'm hoping that you might update it soon.
| TwinGrapeJellies chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
WOW. Loved it. Or so far. You need to write more. Pish Posh with people and putting down of your first chapter for this story, it's a good start off. You could work alot off from this.
| les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
This is a very promising story, which you should continue soon. I love the way you made the whole problem with Amelia's mother dying so realistic, that it was that touching. I can't wait to see what father and daughter will be doing in America, especially when Amelia's love life starts throbbing. Very good job.
| a monday survivor chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
OMG it's so sad! I think the conversion about Amelias studys and going to America could have been better writen. You might want to rewrite it or something. Do you live in London or America by the way? I'll check back.
All Ways A Critic,
Writer With Style
P.S. Very nice plot line if you can pull it off
| sally andersonn chapter 1 . 5/8/2005