|Reviews for Rhythmic|
| Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Captivating stuff really. Love it all especially "I can’t live until I feel like I am dead" and "I can see you suffer, I can play the fool". Keep writing :D
| this is britt chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
I can see you suffer, I can play the fool.
That line mesmerized me. it seemed bitter and pungent. left a bad taste in my mouth? good job. really.