|Reviews for Speechless|
| sunscraped chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Hmm. Intoxicated fits. You could've taken advantage of the format etc by adding italics and stuff to give a little more feeling to it. Thanks for the reviews.
| no-one now chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Wow! The structure of "I'm drowning in you" on different lines really conveys the image of drowning. The repetition worked well, it's altogether a really great poem!