| Reviews for The Beach |
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   estrela chapter 1 . 5/19/2005 it's so peaceful _ |
| Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 5/4/2005 I agree with Christoph Gonzalez, it's very soothing. Nice imagery as well. Keep writing! |
| Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 5/3/2005 Very soothing haiku... I like the oxymoron at the end by the way... "peaceful clashing waves" -conveys a much deeper meaning |
| Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 2/5/2005 Quite good, but I'm not sure peaceful and clashing go together...you've got different moods there. |