Reviews for Endless
KaleidoscopeHope chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
You, my friend, are a genius.
sunscraped chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
This was very nicely done. however, I would examine the last line if i werre you. I see you mean stops beating, but that doesn't flow well, right? But stops to beat sounds like your heart is still beating. Not quite sure what line to use there...!
xxLuvoxx chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
amazing. This poem truely represents how poets feel as they put words on paper (to me, at least)