Reviews for Endless
KaleidoscopeHope chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
You, my friend, are a genius.
sunscraped chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
This was very nicely done. however, I would examine the last line if i werre you. I see you mean stops beating, but that doesn't flow well, right? But stops to beat sounds like your heart is still beating. Not quite sure what line to use there...~!
xxLuvoxx chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
amazing. This poem truely represents how poets feel as they put words on paper (to me, at least)