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   Trish J chapter 1 . 12/16/2008 Oh... my... gosh... It's beautiful. :) |
| Joewhatever chapter 1 . 2/8/2005 Wow, this is so beautifully written. I love it. Made me smile, the last four lines. Great write. |
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 2/6/2005 Wow. Love your descriptions...like with the coke. Makes it seem all the more real. Brilliant. Brava! |
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 2/5/2005 Ooh this is very good! Love the way the lines flow and the words you say. Well done this is very good work! |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2005 I like it a lot.. nice job |
| PirateGrrl chapter 1 . 2/5/2005 WOW, I really loved this! |