|Reviews for Lacking any attempt to conceal|
| Trish J chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Oh... my... gosh...
It's beautiful. :)
| Joewhatever chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
Wow, this is so beautifully written. I love it. Made me smile, the last four lines. Great write.
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Wow. Love your descriptions...like with the coke. Makes it seem all the more real. Brilliant. Brava!
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Ooh this is very good! Love the way the lines flow and the words you say. Well done this is very good work!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
I like it a lot.. nice job
| PirateGrrl chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
WOW, I really loved this!