Reviews for Indescribable chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Wow, I love the feel of this poem. I really like the lines from "The bitter sweetness you" to "Making them bleed all the more." That passage is just really visual. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
diesoz chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
Your stuff is wonderful! I can relate to this poem so well! It's almost like I could have written this, only it wouldn't be so well written.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Love the end. Wonderful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
i can totally relate.. beautifully done.. short but great
MaryCurly chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
I like how you jumped from line to line but continued with the same thoughts. Nice work!