Reviews for Not Supposed to
perpetual Audio chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
I love the beat in this. I can feel your emotion in this poem. kinda makes me wanna cry. but yes. over all a great poem! keep writing!
redsage chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
oh, sad.. if isn't too much.. i feel sorry for him..
loz chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
I just read your summary and now i see that these poems are based on truth.I'm sorry for your loss.I could really see it in your poetry.I really like your style of 's so different to mine and other peoples that i is another really good emotional and using repetition again almost to show questins that are unanswered that you repeatedly .Loz
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
wow that must have been very hard for you and your friends to cope with. Lovely fitting poem. Well done.