Reviews for Lady of Stones
Delsie chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
This is another very powerful piece and one that I truly enjoyed.

I love the imagry of stones that you used. It's common to find beautiful women discribed using various comparassions to gems and you created a wonderful contrast with that in your poem by showing what she used to be and how cold and unfeeling she has become. Like the very stones that she's compared to.

It's almost a pity that this piece is so short, but at the same time it works well, being that short.

I didn't really see any mistakes, so I guess all I can say is how wonderful a piece this is. Also, I know that you have tried your hand at songwriting. After reading this piece, I think that it might make a good song, provived you get the right sort of music for it.

Anyway, please keep writing and I hope to see more work from you soon!

Delsie
dustytiger chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
dunno why but i really like this, good job, thank you for sharing