Reviews for Phoenix
BlackLilyArcher chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Remind me to review. I keep forgetting because I read them offline. Anyways.
Master Mind4 chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
Wow... this is intense. It is great writing and the dark message behind it all is really inspiring. Nice writing here, very well done
izzy chapter 1 . 3/7/2005
really really good! extremely good imagery... loved it! ~kinda harsh tho~
Limerick Foo chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Better than usual, I think you could've gone a bit heavier with phoenix imagery, though. I mean, if you're gonna call it Phoenix, may as well make it more phoenix-y, aye?