Reviews for Pretending
Shailaputri chapter 1 . 2/22
He could have spoken to her in better terms..
DofD chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
So sad.
non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Having me in tears huh? Great job is what I mean :)
VioletHaven chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
this story just made me cry
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
omg, this had really made me cry. good job!
ccaltuna chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
The strange thing I was just listening to that song when I read this story.

Your story was so sad, but I loved it. I like the idea that people can seem so different on the surface but still be so alike underneath.

Really fantastic.
The Latest Plague chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
AH! this was soo good, and deep and- god, you made me CRY!
the flying guilotine chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Idiot Pilot chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Wow that was pretty twisted. It was really sad, but quite possible to be true. After so long of feeling that you weren't good enough for somebody, you probably would be suspicious of them making a move and downplay the entire seriousness of the situation. How sad :(
IAmAFighter chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
bad? you think this is bad? your nuts. this is awesome! i like how you put the lyrics in the story, how it flowed all together. its really sad, but very sweet.
savvydarling chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Oh my gosh, that was so sad. :( But you are a great writer... I babysit my little sister during the day, and for the last few days, I have just sat her down with a movie while I come to read YOUR stories! Lol! Keep up the good work!
Q-pidj-lee chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
wow o.0 lol coolies thats really really but really good. and no its definetly not 'pretty bad'.great job keep it up.
Sinner By Nature chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
why?it was nice though.

Kali Aja chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
This story made me cry. Not many stories can do that. Congradulations.

PLEASE keep writing
thepastisthepast chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
*cries* it's so sad...great job..
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