That was a really wonderful twist that you put on the story. This chaper is one of the best in my opinion. I also liked how you renamed each chapter, very creative names.

whoa... You're first few chapters were a bit blah but this one was really cool. I can't wait until the next one.

Boring start. Didn't read to the end of it.

I didn't like the lazy way you're labelling chapters. I mean, if you're going to make them "chap1", "Chapter 2", at least spell them the same.

Short, but still good. If you could add alittle more inb the next chapter that would be cool. Other than the shortest, this rocked.*applause*

I love it. You are a really good writer and I hope you continue with this story, as well as your other ones.I like how your character is nameless so far, and I really enjoy the fact that you have given the reader a lot of the characters luck, and I hope to see updates soon.

Interesting. It's cool that you didn't give her a namne because it added to the suspense. I look forward to future chapters. *applause*