Reviews for Drowning
nf chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
i love the way you have such a way with words. it's well written, descriptive enough that you feel what's going on but not rambling, which is something i have trouble with. truly admirable.
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
I like the conversation with God and SAtan, though it can't really be called a conversation. This poem is full of deep meaning and i like it! :
AmaranthineMisery chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
lovely... its so instensely sorrowful... the last line was amazing... i loved it.. keep writing
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
You did a beautiful job. I love your poems! Yes, I keep telling you that, but it's because it's true! And your name was in it! Awesome! I hope you see more soon, until then, later.

Masochist Maxwell
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
very nice...i have to say its one of the best peoms i have read in a long time...i can relate a lot to this...the flow is amazing and the whole thing is just beautifully written...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~