Reviews for Daggers
Liz the Ninja chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
I loved it. As someone else before said, dagger is a good metaphor to use. It's stronger then the knife and the sword would represent something righteous. Great job.
CeruleanHeart chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Wow. This is very easy to relate to. It raises some great points too. Dagger is such an awesome word for this; sword is too righteous and knife if okay, but dagger is just so much more powerful of a word. Very great metaphor! I love the repetition in the last line; it really is a strong ending. I love this poem! Keep it up!
GirlNamedLiv chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Oh, very cool. Good job. i like how the speaker is talking to the "stabber person" lol, i need to brush up on my vocabulary.
Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Wow, I loved this. Awesomeness.