Reviews for More Daggers
perpetual Audio chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
your very good at showing your emotion through words the repitition of the word "tears" amplifies this. great poem! adding to my favs.
Bukowski Is chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
Look up the poem "Poetry" by Moore. If you find any meaning in it, you might be able to see exactly what I find wrong in your poem.
eggsbenni221 chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
I like this. It's very "stream of consciousness" sounding. I think that a lot of people can relate to the feelings you describe here.
Chalynka chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
wow.. I really like this because it almost portrays how I feel right now like a wound will never heal.. I also really like the emotion in this. great job
Blood Stained Sorceress chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
That was really good.