This is amazing! This is like, an embodiment of dreams and fantasies that so many have had, so relatable, so fully developed, it's like a painting with no real explanation of the scene, but you understand it anyway. Absolutely flawless.

Love,

~Dia

This is a nice valentines day poem. Nice flow and ideas.

This is full of wonderful imagery. It is such a simple poem, but it still manages to be so deep. I have to ignore the rhyming, I'm not a fan of it. So, will that ignored, the poem is just amazing. Well done!

(Thanks for adding me to your favs!)

i luv this! it is amazingly well written and i like the rhymes. going on my favorites!

Very neat poem...cool capture of a welcoming atmosphere, I like it very much.

JILL! as an evil villain once said' rock on with your bad self!' YEA! I feel the LOVE! It's so said at how it seems to relat to the littler kids(aka swing sets) and then BAM! it gets DEEP! on words to the next...*BEWARE*4eva a blonde hermione- Su

i don't know if I can say how much I liked this. Everything about it...it was so songlike, and so beautifully written. Definite favorites list addition.