Beautiful, and the simplicity of the sentences really helps with the picture because you can focus more on the image that on what the huge words mean. :) Good job.

I decided to read more of your work. This too is very beautiful. Was this based off a dream? I am just curious. I'm researching dreams for a research paper, and this seems like something I myself have dreamed before. I will read on now and stop talking so much :) ~Abigail