Reviews for How
Fading Flower chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I sympathize over your situation, but I agree with the first commentator: you need more poetry, less monologue. You've done good on your previous pieces, though, so good job on those.
0101010101010101011 chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I'm not a poet, but I feel that you should try to be more lyrical or something. This sounds more like a monologue or a piece of prose than actual poetry.