Reviews for Under Construction
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
oh nice! i don't know what the 'I' is though... still wondering. excellent use of repetition.
SumiFritzN chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I have just read my favorite poem written by you. Hands down. I kid you not, I could hear you reading it. Even though it's about your life, and your backgroud, it reminded me of so many things. I mean, sure, there were a few things in there that I know about, but that's not what I mean. The whole mood and idea of the poem is so relaxing, and yet it's not saying that today's any better or worse then the past, it's perfect. Great
monkey chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
oh my gosh. lindzoid this is so cool! i especially like the inside jokes that i could recognise! : - p
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
i liek the repition & the end of each stanza and the whole idea about where your from is awesome.. can i steal it?
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Lellida!This was so well written and surprising. _ I loved it though. Was so personal and deep. I loved it!

!* Noelle *!