Reviews for This is my Goodbye
The Magician Joseph chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
Very good, I like the end and the imagery, quite insperational.
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Wow. A touching and sad poem, you express the speaker's hurt really well, and I like the way you insert unexpected stylistic breaks such as "dont. you. fucking. get. it" to show that emotional pain. I love the image "bled everything I never said". this is so true.