Wow, this was really good. I love the way you were able to express the deepness of the emotions while at the same time making it feel like the speaker wasn't feeling anything at all... If that makes any sense (which is probably doesn't, I'm sorry~!) Wonderful job.

I’m alright I don’t need help from you

Is the line where it changes? I especially love the ending, 'twas rather well done.

Stunning. I think I know what you meant now, about it being hard to put into words. Or, at least, I see why you were commenting on it.

you made the switch very smoothly that I can't even tell where it was - that talent! - wonderful poem... very angsty...

btw thanks for reviewing for my poem 'Calling' - I've never heard of a church strongly against missionary and I guess what happened before must've been very akward. -_-()

O.O

Sort of reminds me of CERTAIN (-cough, cough-) politicians who use god as an excuse for their actions.

It's demeaning both to Christians and non-Christians.

ok lemme guess is it "I'm alright I don't need help from you" ? oh well i really like the idea behind it and all. good job.