|Reviews for Piece of Paper|
| standing.in.the.wreckage chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I really liked it I think thats why a lot of us write to well thats why i do. nicely done.
| Joey7691 chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
This is a great one. From the heart, and very strong. I agree in every sense. Well done.
| Daisy Decamps chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
Wow, I love it, even though you might not like it as much. It totally conveys the feeling of writing. And I like the ending : "If only for a moment."
| Jamie Giacomelli chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
ah yea, i really get this one. good work
| morbidme chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
Your such a powerful artist i enjoy reading your poetry so much great job agian
| somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
I think almost everyone on fictionpress can relate. inspiring
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
white paper—brain runs,
broad prairie inhabited,
by our mad hare thoughts.
scribbled this & that,
¿what can it mean to her now?
she's so far away.
brought me back to writing this,
pleasure telling u.
¿u 4got him then?
only looks at stars.
my alzheimer's up,
can't remember who u r,
¿someone that i luv?
white,—for brides & death,
in nippon they think it so,—
but haiku as well.
smeared ink on flat white,
tears besmirch love's passing quick,
don't know what to think.
maple leaves red brown,
pressed between two sheets of white,
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
I love the reality to this piece, how the ink moves across the page and eases pain. It is so true. And know how much I appreciate all your reviews. I sorry not to get to review more, my work is so busy at times, I just wind up posting. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you.
| confused being99 chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
how true. i know some ppl think its weird but having a diary really helps me. good job~*~confused being99~*~
| xHannahx chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
yeah, i can relate. even if you talk to people they can never know the whole story. cool poem.
| myno chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Yeah it's not your best, but it gets the point across and is poetic.
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Hey, this is really awsome. Yea, I too know why I write the way I do and such. I could really relate to this. It's brilliant. Yea, puasing suicide if only for a moment.
| Tom Madden chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
i like it. it's really deep. nice work
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Once again you have captured feelings I am all too familiar with, just can't get down on paper! Thanks! Good Job!Elli
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
4th line, you mean understand. check that :) i like this, isn't that the reason we all write, to pour out our pain? awesome job.