|Reviews for Untitled|
| Kirihime chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
| hellosorrowtomorrow chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Aww..that was adorable :)
| scarred memory chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
I liked it enough to review. Which, in itself, is something, because I'm one of those dicks that never review.
But I really liked the format in which it was written. Very to the point.
And, that's all. Kaz is a hardcore name, Derek really isn't, but who'm I to judge?
| naraka chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
the dialogue isn't hard to follow, it had a certain uniqueness to it, kaz is honest and doesn't seem to mind saying what's truly on his mind, simply the facts. Kinda like: He doesn't like guys, He doesn't like girls, He likes derek and not one-night things. and now he probably dislikes his sister very strongly, lol.
Derek seems a rather amused person while enjoying kaz's company, and their interaction has a sparkle to it, he too pushes a bit with the kisses and the dancing, which is good in this story. you're writing style is good and the story had essence, thanks for sharing it.
| Emerald Dragon77 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
The dialogue wasn't confusing-at least not for me. I actually liked this a lot. I can't quite put my finger on the reason. Maybe because it feels different somehow. Sorry, I'm not being very articulate. In any case, great job!
| Curb Crasher chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Nah-I love the dialogue! It wouldn't be the same with Derek/Kaz said.
| BlackBlueDreams chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I liked this, it had a simplistic style to it and the characters seemed so totally opposed that I couldn't help but grin. You're style doesn't need to have the 'he said' tag because it would make it tedious and overcomplicated.
Overall it is well written and the simplicity is the key to that.
| Rabid Bumblebee chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
I liked this a lot. The dialogue without the tags gives it sort of a surreal and slightly strange! My kind of fic!It's just a really good, interesting, fic, I guess. I liked it a bunch.
| Collar de Espinas chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
I'm a complete and utter angst-whore, but there's nothing like that feeling you get after reading a wonderfully fluffy *sweet* story.
And right now, I've got that feeling ten times ten... *grins*
| Macabre Love chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Love it! Within the next few days I'm sure I'll have read all of your other stories. I really like the style it this one, the repeating and all. It makes so... I don't have a word for it. Awesome job.
| Prisoner-11 chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Nice. Very sweet.
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
I like this. Interesting, slightly different style. Sometimes it's confusing when a character says something with a pause in the middle and you start a new line when you technically shouldn't and this makes it more confusing. But it's good.
| Zeva chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
You should never apologize for the way you write a story. I really like your style-the dialogue in such a way is very interesting. Hali
| taeguk chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
I wasn't confused by the conversation without the tags. I do that myself in stories that I never finish. But I do it. _
| Rabbit James chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
That was surprising wonderful. It was very...well I can't seem to find an adequate descriptor. But it was light hearted and...fun. It was very pleasing, good job.